Thursday 19 June 2014

Making a Plan

I am learning to make a plan before I write. My plan has good ideas. It tells me when, who and what. I wrote my plan but I didn't write a story.



Kael
yesterday there was a fire near my house

Fire
Scared
I was very scared and. Then my mum came down to the park. then my mum told me to go back home.



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