Thursday 19 June 2014

My Community

I have made a plan and written my story using my plan. My plan matches my story. Next time I will write a story that matches my plan.

My Community

Do you know that I’m from two communities? One of them is the library community. I get the books for  free. Also I’m from the church community. We go there almost every week. Also I  belong to the New Zealand community and be safe! But my favourite now is library. Then I said I love my family.

Kael

Making a Plan

I am learning to make a plan before I write. My plan has good ideas. It tells me when, who and what. I wrote my plan but I didn't write a story.



Kael
yesterday there was a fire near my house

Fire
Scared
I was very scared and. Then my mum came down to the park. then my mum told me to go back home.



My Pepeha